As part of a Creative Writing class that took place here at five oak avenue one of my fairies took my piece of prose, "A Lonely Back Garden" and changed it into a poem. It turned into something extremely different, yet the sentiment is still there.
A Lonely Back Garden
A
labyrinth of sunny days and fairytales.
Forgotten
fields of climbing trees.
Smashed
flower beds of soccer balls.
Cracked
windows and an angry mom.
Winter
nights of fireball stars,
smells
of sleepy logs.
A
different kind of waiting room,
Spider
webbed Silence.-
Washing
lines of socks and ties.
Whistling
birds in gutters.
Beneath
empty shells and broken dolls
just swingless Silence-
Laura Roddy
This was the original ( which I had posted on here, but somehow managed to delete)
The worms are coursing through my veins, my blood I need to
breathe. The wind glides through the grass upon my crown; it helps me to keep
warm. But, its winter now and the frosty mornings make for ice down through my
tummy. It’s the time of year when I’m coarse and hard and have no sympathy for
pecking birds. Birds that must fly south every year and I blame it on the
elements. The ice and cold are not my friends too much of them cause me damage;
they stunt the flowers within my growth and cause for municipal rooting. In the
spring time when it’s wet and windy and I just wish to be left, its then you
come with your spade and start to dissect.
You tear the
grass from my head and start to dig holes, placing flowers in me that reach
down to my bowels, extracting my life and nutrients. You have dug me up before,
built a wall on me, an extension and a garden path, but don’t you realise... I
am the soul of a lonely back garden, the foundation you needed for your family
home, your wooden shed, your happy children. They played soccer on me, they
made scuff marks on me, they slept on me and like you tried to dig me. You
placed a swing on me, stabbed its feet into me. It hopped every time she swung
on it, and I felt jabbing pains in my stomach, but I didn’t complain. I liked
the sound of your children’s laughter, it helped me flourish. Your dog’s
bountiful leaps on me, the sound of his bark, the way he too tried to dig me up
with his snout burying bones that are still embedded deep under my skin.
Your
children have grown up now, and you took the swing away. The dog sleeps in his
basket all day, occasionally getting up for dinner or to greet you from work.
It seems that I am the only part of your family that is still left. I wait for
the sunny days, when you come to the outer shrine, lay down your blanket and
lie on me, the worms still eating through me -Our pulses beating as one. I am
the soul of your back garden, please don’t forget me.